Hiding From Myself- Austin Tone


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  1. Ani LongNovember 8, 2018 at 7:30 AM

    This is a really well developed and creative idea on the self portrait assignment. When I originally saw that you only had a video I was expecting something, well less than stellar. By the time the 2nd line of the ascii art was displayed was when my original thought changed. Your flash fiction blends beautifully with the aesthetic of a computer in a more primitive state, one without some UI, just a slightly greenish tinted screen with a blocky green text indicator being the only thing visible. Additionally the flash fiction tells the story of a man hidden behind a screen, alone, with no one. This is strengthened by your note pad use by bringing to the idea of a loner, someone who usually studies code and coding

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  2. Brandon Luong-TranNovember 12, 2018 at 9:20 AM

    It was very creative to use a vbscript cause its not hard and If I remember correctly you had around 300-400 lines maybe more. Your Flash Fiction is great because I can completely relate because experiences I had when I was younger has made me a better man.

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  3. Isaac PtacekNovember 12, 2018 at 12:53 PM

    Wow, this is new. I’ve not seen anyone else write a self-writing script to tell your story. The Flash Fiction and image work together very well, and its tied together with the artist statement nicely. I love the last line in your TS/IS where you say, ““The story’s yours, go write it.” You are your story, write yourself.”

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  4. Cole KjarNovember 15, 2018 at 1:35 PM

    First of all, props on a very creative project. Second, I really enjoy the quote in your flash fiction, "His past relationships have made him both a better and broken man". I feel strongly about the fact that the people in your life change you for the better or the worse.

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